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My poem, I hope you like it.

Although I'm so happy when I'm with you...

Although I care about you more then anything else in the world, and will love you forever and ever

Although my darkness turns to light only when I'm with you my love

My tears are shed because I love you, and because.........

Tomorrow... you will no longer be around to protect me.

Tomorrow.... I must kill you

Tomorrow... your blood shall stay stained on my clothing.

And tomorrow... I shall go to the depths of hell because of you.

Tomorrow... we shall both die, you will go to heaven, while I go to the other place.

brooke9878 posted over a year ago

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juicyjossy9 said:

Deep and sad, but well-written nonetheless...

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posted over a year ago

Emmalie1935 said:

wow that's good :)

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chattycandy said:

that good.

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nikki5516 said:

That has a very deep feeling to it.
I think its good.
What made you write this?

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posted over a year ago

(Me on my side account)

ninjacupcake88 posted over a year ago

I wrote this because I thought it would be interesting for a story I was writing about a girl who kills who she is in love with.

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zaklovaa said:

ii love dis poem!! its sooo passinate!! this reminds me of my ex.......... I HATE SHAWN D. JONES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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posted over a year ago

deathroman13 said:

sad poem but really good written. (I hope that was proper english XD)

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posted over a year ago

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