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What do you think of my poem about my guy friend and what he did to me. Hope you enjoy, and btw True Story! Enjoy!

When i see him i melt inside
He's mysterious, has stuff he hides
He's my best guy friend that i have
Me+Him=Love,you see its simple math
Every day i look forward to see his smile
He makes everyday of my life worthwhile
He gives me advice when i dont know what to do
He makes me feel better when i am blue
We have a good friendship, i dont
want that to change,
To ask and get rejected i cant take the pain
My friends think my feelings should be free
Its easy for them hard for me
He's sweet, he's funny, he's one-of-a-kind
Everything he does just blows my mind
He plays guitar while i sing
To do a duet it would mean everything
We talk on the phone for as long as we can
But when we hang up i dont want it to end
When I'm with him its not what it seems
So unreal it feels like a dream
He's wherever i go in my dreams and my heart
If he said no it would tear me apart
I'd fill up with tears if he died tomorrow
Weep all day be full of sorrow
Whenever we hang out its so much fun, you see
He doesnt understand he was meant for me
I need him hear by my side
For him to be open; not afraid to hide
When I'm with him the fun never ends
Then i remember that were just friends
He tells me his secrets but are they just lies
I like him to much canat he hear my cries
Morning, Night, and Noon
I dont want to ask to soon
I decided to start small
Cause i didnt know if we had love at all
He said i dont know so i decided to call
I called he told to wait just 20
I talked to a friend and waited plenty
Seconds turned to Minutes turned to hours
Then the hour turned into a day, i guess he was a
little coward
He missed my performance he missed my show
And he didnt even let me know
Ended up tearing my heart in half
I knew that the crush wouldnt last
A day later the texted back
Told me to stop calling him, that i was whack
I texted back sad and torn, i dont need you anymore
i wasnt trying to stalk just mean and bored
i sat and began to cry
Sad i will l
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Sad but i will get bye, Because its more of a loss for him then a loss for I
Poppygirl9904 posted over a year ago
 Poppygirl9904 posted over a year ago
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